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Yesterday Once More
Yesterday Once More

when where what/how did you feel

只要发生在过去的事情,就用心情三段式,6~7句话概括一个大纲(事情经过+心里活动)

一分钟笔记:

  1. 时态 - ed did was were
  2. 对象 offer
  3. 每个阶段的心情

1. head

Well,the experience I’d like to share with you happened…ago, while I was doing…/while I was about to …; back then…

2. body, first

At first, I was xxx, since barely did I know much about xxx, and especially when I couldn’t make any progress, I really wanted to give up.

3. body, second

But afterwards, accidentally, I attended a seminar regarding studying abroad and working abroad, during the speech, he shared many stories of application and ups and downs;

when he said that as long as you put all your soul and mind into one thing, you can achieve anything.

4.

I became inspired, and I decided to work hard, Eventually, the moment I got xxx, I was so proud and excited, since I fulfilled my promise.

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